I think it would be interesting for Videl to be part Saiyan! You should go for it. Great story, Update soon!

Ino***
Writer for Team Dragon Star

Hmm, it could be a great story but I'm dissappointed by how you changed Videl's character.
Also:
""So Videl if f(x)x-25, what are the zeros?" Gohan asked pointing towards one of the problem in his text book.
"Umm… is it 'x' equals five and negative five?" Videl asked"

No, that is not correct. The sole zero is 25 in that case. Were it f(x)x2-25, then you'd have the zeros you gave. Also, such math is like 13 year old level, not final year of highschool level like Gohan and Videl are in.

make more! i like this story! gohan has to save videl from the horrible future with... with... that... THING! yeAH FOR GOHANxVIDEL!

Hahah:) I love the way you made Videl her old self in this chpt:). Update soon please!xD

Loved this chpt but why doesn't Videl tell Gohan what's happening? He could help a lot! But the secret will create a lot more suspense in the later chpts:) update soon!

Pretty good continue please.

woah Hercule's getting pretty evil now.

Aside from that PLEASE update soon!

You had a few typos here and there, but I think most were easily overlooked. Other than that, another great chapter. I feel bad for Videl's mother, but at least Videl herself is gaining confidence. I hope you update soon :)

videl! go to gohan! YEAH! *obvious*

OMFG! videl's mom is back

please finish

I love this and a good shocker at the end!I can't wait for the next chapter

Haha!xD this is amazing! Videls mom is bck.. From the dead? Nah! Just explain where the hell she's been and we'll all be super happy! I love the way she described Sharpner 'creepy blonde stalker!' LMFAO!

Well, well, well, so in this one Videl's mother is still alive and not happy about a few things.

Dude, Videl's mom is alive? Did her parents get a divorce? Is that why Videl never sees her mom? Please update soon. Man, it didn't take much for Gohan to reveal his secrets, did it? Oh well, it could be worse.