i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Bella & Edward together

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I'm Gonna Be Honest .. I Didn't Like It & You Wanna Know Why ?

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Well, that was delicious. My God, I would love to read several chapters of ths. Anywho, I just wanted to let you know that this was chosen as the One Shot to read this week by the Twilight Fanfiction Bookclub on Facebook. And it was well deserved. I tip my drivers hat to you ;)

Poor lonely Bella well she got what she needed from Edward her driver for sure!

I would like an outtake of Bella wearing said hat. Lol.

I was poking through my obsene list of To-Be-Reads and you can't imagine my surprise when I saw an undiscover FicFreak oneshot hiding in the pile.

I love the start, lol, but I actually managed to keep a straight face until I got to this line:

-Shit…was she inviting me to make out with her?

I love when you write Horny-ward from Horney-ward's pov. Lust makes him funnier.

And the conversation in the back of the limo makes me sad for Coorporate Bella. and in awe of horny Edward...because on the inside he's an idiot. But he still manages to say the right things at the right time, when theyre needed.

Ceo Bella wears crotch less thong? her I thought the point of a thong was that it was ass-less. I don't know whether to question exactly what kind of slutty-emo- nympho she is, or ask why she bothered with underwear at all...

LOL, nicely ended lady! But now I'm wondering how they're going to top that, when they have that date!

PS.

In an unrelated revelation,

Is it too soon to wish you a happy birthday?

'Cause I'm doing it...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

Loved this sweet one shot. Found it thru Fb. Tx!

Great story! Loved it :D

Super hot

HAWT!

Hahaha! That was a cute story. :) You know this one shot would be an awesome full length story.

I giggled...yes I said it (or typed it) I fucking giggled & squealed.

oh man kinky shiiiiiiit lol

aww fluffy