D 'awwwwwww! I love fluff! Write more, please!

They say when you find your true love sparks dont fly, fireworks do

Great job! I will await eagerly for the next chapter!

I was going to wait to review til the last one, but THIS WAS SO FLUFFY! :D Kay, im good. Continuing!

I wanted the end to be like this: I, Vlad Plasmius, will return to Earth. And this time, I guarantee that i'm gonna be THE, BIGGEST. JERK. EVER!

(half that was written by u, the other part by me! the 'THE, BIGGEST. JERK. EVER!' thingy. :D)

U should do the 'wet himself in his sleep' thing as a Johnny oneshot lol

OH MY GOD TUCK SHE'S JEALOUS OF SAM!

Tuck: *puts it in the blackmail folder* YEA! SAMS GONNA LOVE THIS!

First of all, I love it when people write about minor characters. Nobody does it enough. Also, even though I do see some very slight grammatical errors, the stuff is engaging enough that it doesn't throw me out of the story like it normally would.

Here's an OC I haven't written about yet, and I'm not sure I plan to, but she popped into my head randomly one day and I decided that I like her.

Name- Mohini "Mo" Manasi

Age- 14

Species (Must be a human or ghost)- Human

Personality- A shy, introverted girl who tends to be a little obsessive and self-conscious. She has a stutter that makes her afraid to speak to people, for fear that she will be made fun of - and she's probably right.

Flaws- Her stutter

Her obsessiveness (seriously, her closet is color coded and if she comes into class and if the desks aren't what she considers "EXACTLY RIGHT" she spends her time rearranging them whether the teacher likes it or not.)

Her self-consciousness makes her freeze up if she should ever have to do something in front of people (presentations, public speaking, etc.) sometimes she even gets sick.

Bio (this is to help me find a one-shot to feature your OC in)- Mohini is a shy young girl of Indian descent. She prefers to be called Mo by what few friends she has, and she has a better realtionship with animals than people. She has two brothers, Ravi and Bisaj, and a sister named Gita. She was born in New Delhi, India and moved to America when she was ten years old. Her parents are still together, but they don't quite understand their daughter. She likes science and math the most - she doesn't like abstract ideas that much, and English is hard for her because it's not her first language.

Looks- Rectangular glasses, braces, and often wears dresses instead of more casual clothing.

Hair: Black and very thick, ususally crimped or straightened, however she is feeling that day.

Eyes: Brown.

Skin Tone: Dark brown

Extra: nothing much extra. She bites her nails, though.

Social Class- unpopular, but she doesn't want to be. She wishes she was more confident but it's harder than it sounds.

Powers (if a ghost)- N/a

Crush- Tucker Foley, but she is way too shy to talk to him. Like, ever. She look at him but look away if he looks back, and it's really kind of pathetic.

Other- ...there's not much else, really.

Aw. Poor Boxy. Though, Ember does have a point. You are not scary.

Box Ghost: Yes I am! Beware!

Me: ...

YAY! TUCK GET THE FOLDER!

Tuck: I LOVE THIS JOB!

Me: ME TOO!

Me: YAY! LUV IT! TUCK, GET THE BLACKMAIL FOLDER!

Tuck: GOT IT!

Danny: ... I hate you people...

Me: Awww... Thank you!

Anyway, Sam, Danny, Tuck, and I will PM you and make OCs. I'm only letting them do them cuz it'll be really entertaining!

Danny: And we blackmailed her.

Me: that too.

Danny: YES! HE ADMITS IT! Now I need a pic of his cat...

Me: Try this! *gives him several videos of his MANY cats named maddie* They're all named Maddie... EW...

... I should write something like that one day...

I know you said not to say this, but I absolutely loved this. A lot of angst I read (and unfortunately write) is like Danny thinking "Oh my life is so horrible I'm gonna kill myself now and get rid of these stupid powers" and then for some odd reason Sam (never Tucker, may I note) comes in and she's like "No Danny I love you!" and then he goes "You're right, let's make out" or something along those lines. But you kept things realistic and a bit neutral. I especially liked the ending where he says he wouldn't give up his powers for anything. That right there is a good ending.

And sorry about that rant. It's a stupid habit of mine that I need to break.

-CatchingWind

(PS Is it too late to submit an OC? If not, here's my application:

Name: Diana Carter

Age: 14

Species: Human

Personality: Can be fierce if edged on; she's usually friendly, but only to a few people since she's like a lone wolf

Flaws: Like I said, she prefers to stick by herself, which doesn't give her anybody to fall onto (not literally XP); has somewhat of a flammable temper

Biography: Diana was born in Elmerton on June 22nd, 1997. She and her parents moved to Amity when Mr. Carter found work at the local hospital. She's attended Amity schoolls, which is how she ended up at Casper High. She's friends with Dash and Valerie, but certainly not a popular girl. They like her and she likes them back. She knows Danny, Sam, and Tucker, but doesn't particularly care for them (not in a biased way)

Looks: Normally wears tan cargo pants, a white t- shirt, and a black hoodie. Likes comfortable clothing.

Hair: Mousy brown; messy and pulled into a ponytail

Eyes: Gray- green

Skin Tone: Pale, but with a healthy tan color

Extra: Diana wears glasses- the nd with frames only on the top half

Social Class: Not a nerd, but not popular either. Wavers in the middle class. She hates being labeled though.

Crush: Dash (and not because he's popular...)

Is that sufficient? Feel free to ask me questions!)

Name- Flare

Age- bilogically 14 chonologically about 35? she lost track

Species (Must be a human or ghost)- ghost

Personality- she's a very shy kind of person. she also has a huge fear of humans (see bio) and when the portal opened up her older brother Blaze (again see bio and other and second OC) told her to stay far away from it. once you get to know her, she's a very happy and confident person who isn't afraid of a lot of stuff

Flaws- she has a lot of trusting issues. she will either be really shy and scared when she first meets a human as if they'll pull out an ecto-gun

Bio (this is to help me find a one-shot to feature your OC in)- when Flare was a little girl (she was born a ghost and stopped aging at the age of fourteen) she and her older brother Blaze were kidnapped by the Guys in White. her older brother, Blaze was tortured by a mysterious machine and after words she was too. she doesn't remember much about the experience because she was so young, but ever since she's had a big fear of humans and trusting issues

Looks-

Hair: dark crimson red, like fire and really long, usually kept in a pony tail (think Ember's hair only red)

Eyes: luminesent green

Skin Tone: pale as a... well as a ghost

Extra: she's also got tons of burning scars from the torture machine she was put in as a little girl.

Social Class- middle i guess

Powers (if a ghost)- she can control fire and create fire, heance her name.

Crush- none

Other- she has an older brother named Blaze. they've been inseperable and he gets extremely protective of her and will probably kill any human for her safety.

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Name- Blaze

Age- bilogically 16 chronologically about 37

Species (Must be a human or ghost)- ghost

Personality- he used to be carefree and kind, but after the GIW thing, he became like a rock: hard and difficult to break. he's also very protectiv of his younger sister, Flare.

Flaws- he has trusting issues, like his sister. onl yFlare will be scared to death while he will probably attack or something like that.

Bio (this is to help me find a one-shot to feature your OC in)- when he was about seven years old, he and Flare were kidnapped by the GIW to be experimented on. after a lot of torture, a woman rescued them, but he was out cold, so he doens't know that ll humans are bad. ever since he hasn't been able to trust any human, no matter how good they are.

Looks-

Hair: bright red and kind of spikey

Eyes: bright luminesent green

Skin Tone: as pale as a... well... as a ghost

Extra: he has burn marks from the torture and a few scars

Social Class- middle

Powers (if a ghost)- he can control fire. his powers are at the max when he's with his sister. and vise versa

Crush- Jazz Fenton (after a lot of her therapy sessions, they fell in love... sort of. it's kind of like Romeo and Juliet)

Other- he has a younger sister and is very protective of her.

i really like the One-shot thing so far. please conitnue!

Wow that last chapter had a lotta detail it felt like I was there. I love that your so creative could I b in your nxt 1? Name sylvie Anderson age 15 ish species fully human flaws super hyper hair strawberry blonde short boy cut with mini curls eyes turquoise skin tone pale height 4 foot 7 build petite social class lower in rank with Danny Sam and Tucker

Powers none crush Tucker other pet chameleon named pascal ;) I hope u put me in ur ausome, peace out from izzybelle!