Poor Bowser.

The ultimate light technique... I doubt that's the ultimate Luigi technique, though... I think that might have something more to do with chaos, rather than light or dark.

As always, well done.

Awesome story. It makes sense that Fawful uses so much toothpaste.

Crud. Now Mario's a lady. Now he can't date Peach anymore.

Well, there have been seven like him before, but only Bowser, Kamek, and a group of Yoshis is aware of this; and only the group of Yoshis know who they are. Mario, Luigi, Wario, Donkey Kong, Bowser, Princess Peach, and Yoshi are the seven star children.

Of course, considering that he's Luigi... Luigi is unique among the seven, so there's only been one like him before.

Anyway, good chapter... There are some funny parts (I like that), it's well written, and I can't wait for more.

On an open field... Well, that eventually does happen, to some degree. It's not technically a field, but it does happen a few times that the environment can't be used against Bowser, and Mario wins anyway.

I like it, it's neat. But it reminds me of some other story I read...hmm oh well. Keep going on.

You got some parts of Mario's and Luigi's personalities mixed around... Luigi's the one who can be a bit snarky at times, not Mario, and Mario strikes me as more of a person who would watch TV than Luigi, who appears to be quite athletic, being quite a bit faster on his feet than Mario, and, well, every single human in the series, and the only character able to run on water normally. He's also most certainly the smarter of the brothers... And the more kindhearted of the two...