*sniffle* I may cry. God, that ending was. Like. So heartbreaking. My poor Murdock!

GREAT job. So much that I loved about this one. It's so strange seeing Murdock as anything less than his usual, cheery, crazy-not-crazy self, but you pulled it off beautifully. The whole backstory with Cai and the baby... I'm going to set myself cry if I talk about it, but it was so beautiful and sweet (until the end, then it was just effing tragic! Poor Murdock!).

Not going to lie, Hannibal FINALLY going all bad-ass on Daddy-Stevens was AMAZING. I was just like, YES! You tell 'im, Hannibal!

Great, great job. I totally loved it.

Hello Tiggertoo!

I have been reading you and sss979's books for a while,( not sure but does Q {now monkeeshines} help too?] I haven't gotten a chance to say to YOU specifically, that I REALLY enjoy your books! XD

I can't wait for the next book to come out, What happens in Vegas! (excitedness!)I really liked Don't say a word, and the last word, but I REALLY, *gasp* REALLY, liked Convicts! I've always wondered how they got away in the first place! Always!

HOLY CHOCOLATE! I just saw that on sss979's page the new book is up! I gotta go!

XD

ps. tell Q that I am really looking foward to the continuation to the book Power play. (it's great!)It ended in a cliffhanger...

Sob

I'm literally crying.

Poor Cai. Poor Phouc.

Stupid Alan.

What a sad, beautiful story. The back and forth was wonderful...such a good insight into the pilot's life, his feelings. You've so broken my heart with this piece, but in a good, albeit sad, way. Nicely done!

Loved it! Heartbreaking but brilliantly so. Can't wait for the next one :)

hope she'll be able to give him the time he needs and still be there for him whenever he will need her in the future!

I am so glad there was a part of Murdock lingering about. Kelly's eyes seem to be open now, I can only hope that it's not too late.

glad to have hannibal holding up the fort!

poor murdock!

poor murdock, what must have been going on in his head to come to this decision...

cai! nooooo!

*sigh* I knew you'd break my heart. I could see it coming and yet...it still hurt so much... That is what good writing is about... Well done.

Wow! These last two chapters have been amazing; the pacing has been perfect for evoking the right level of emotion, especially that last bit in Vietnam.

Can't wait to see Kelly's reaction to the Randy incident and I eagerly await the end of this brilliant story :)

Even though I knew this was coming (the results, not the means) it still breaks my heart. It certainly explains why Murdock ended up at the VA. Though, knowing he lived through that experience, I worry more about the current situation.

Murdock finally snapped...but how much can you take? What about Kelly? He did promised not to go too far and after that her brother is a mess (and a freak). Great Job.

intense! takes a lot to make murdock snap like that...

what about kelly? how will she take that?

Murdock was right, they really should have gone some place else. Too bad hind sight is 20/20. I'm curious to see how they get out of this mess; both with the law and with Kelly.