Superb. Well done!

this sounds really good. percy is always portrayed as a mean, ignorant machine, but you've tapped into HIS feelings. I hope you continue with this!

Poor, honourable Percy.

That was really excellent... I really really like this.

This is very good as a one-shot, although I can honestly say I can't see Percy as a spy. I do like the angst factor, though. The way you've approached Percy's dealing with "the shades of gray," and his lost idealism/innocence-all very well done.

Beautiful! Percy is my absolute *favorite* character, and it's nice to see him characterized as a human being and not as a badge-wearing automaton. Hope you continue this! _

Hopefull another part? A sequel? Something to prove Percy's shade of gray. Wonderful characterization. Percy's a favorite of mine and it's awesome to see some indepth digs into his own life.

Keep writing!

Right. I had to read this through two times to fully "get" it. The first time, I thought it was pretty good, your usual angsty stuff, good handle on the moral dilemma Percy's been going through, perhaps a little stilted language at points- and then I looked at some of the places where I thought it was a little stilted, and realized that I was missing about half of the effect of the story. Obviously, for me to notice those lyrics your attempt to integrate them can be a little uneven, but as I went back through it I saw all the places where it escaped my attention the first time, and can do no more than bow to your writing superiority in integrating those parts of it so seamlessly. Bravo.

Oh, and in a totally unrelated bit of nagging, send Sunday to FictionAlley! Do it!