Sorry to her about the girl hope you get her eventually don't give up ;) I really like this keep it up its good that it's kind if based on what your feeling it makes it more realistic I guess? Update soon?! :)

Wow great story!look I'm new in this site can you even read my story?

It's also about wingin'it and wizard of Wiverly place

update?

Wow, that was intense at the ending, Carl's really getting crazy, maybe in the next chapter, we could maybe have abit of a back story on Ralph, just a suggestion.:)

Hey, sorry didn't get a chance to read it last night, this is really good I adore the song in chapter 4. Oh and thank you so much for reviewing my story:D

MNQ

waaaaait - i cnt review twice for the same chapter but yuo said in ch3 carl and ralph kissing - it's supposed to be Jane and Ralph isn't it?

cool!

This deserves a LOT more than 1 review!

Good fic man. You capture Carl's old feeling for Jane pretty well, and I like the character "The Breaker". He works well for this story. A few spelling mistakes here and there, nothing too major so who cares XD. I'd like to keep contacting you through PM, if that's ok?

Oh... I like CarlxJane and all... but I just think, after episode 13 season 2, CarlxDenise works so much better. Other than that, good fic, don't lose momentum writing.

Meph out