| Reviews for Mz Attica |
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Takia 5/18/13 . chapter 11 When I was on quotev I found a story called Ms Attica I think that person copied your story but they did'nt finish they got to about chapter 2 you should check it out. |
Emblazoned-Writing 5/2/13 . chapter 11Aw, great ending! Update soon! |
Emblazoned-Writing 5/2/13 . chapter 5I love this, keeping up the great writing! |
Jocy723 2/24/13 . chapter 11 Update! |
Jleighl1987 1/23/13 . chapter 11ahhhhhhh update soon! i love this story! |
Vanessa 8/31/12 . chapter 1 It's awesome can you please finish it? |
SpaceAstronautCapt.RobotKoala 7/24/12 . chapter 4Well I've only gotten to chapter 4 right now but it's a good story :) The only thing I'd like to say is that I've noticed that every bit of dialogue (that I have seen so far) is accompanied by a "so-and-so says" or something like that. You don't need to have to always say who's doing the talking, especially if it's a back-and-forth convo where you don't really need to clarify who's speaking. I hope that makes sense hahaha. But I'm going to read the rest & I'd like to see more :) xx |
back2vintage 7/12/12 . chapter 11love this story update soon please |
Guest 5/21/12 . chapter 10 WOW I REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY PLS UPDATE AND TELL US WHAT HAPPENED TO EVERYONE ELSE |
Guest 5/21/12 . chapter 10 WOW I REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY PLS UPDATE AND TELL US WHAT HAPPENED TO EVERYONE ELSE |
Kel1017 3/9/12 . chapter 1Great chapter plz continue and plz update faster. |
Renji504 1/23/12 . chapter 8AWESOME STORY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
JasmineChyanne 1/6/12 . chapter 8love this story hope none of them die |
babyjay2fly 12/28/11 . chapter 7Just finished reading your story so far and i love Jessica's since of humor and her relationship with her brothers. i always wondered how the story would be different if they had females in the group as well(not including Lily since she wasnt actually IN the group)im likeing urtake on things though...and Jessica and AJ are SO cute together though personally i always perfered jesse he's always been my crush lol...but anyway great job on remakng the story in your own way...next chapter is gonna be so sad unless you change it up which im kinda hoping you are i personally hated how the movie ended. And for what he did to them i think ghost should have suffered more ijs...hope u update soon : ) |
Hiphopangel1221 11/6/11 . chapter 7I freaking love this story! As I'm looking through Takers Stories, I find yours to draw me in. Anyways, the next chapter is gonna be so depressing. I can't wait for it! UPDATE SOON! |