I loved this story. It was so good.

Thankyou for this ride of pure fantastical pleasure. I assume it was not intentional and I do not mean it as a negative critisism but you really did make me laugh and I needed that! I guess that as a 40 year old this type of teen romance will not have the same innocent resonance it would have to a younger person I did find it endearingly funny in a kind of as you might say "eye rolling" kind of way.

Your grasp of weaving a tense and suspenseful thriller around a beautiful romantic background is really very impressive, I only stumbled on this site recently and had no idea of the breadth and skill and imagination of what I was about to read when I started this story. I'm sure I'm not alone in dearly wishing for the Hogwarts and lets face it the Snape experience to end and with your research and character study I did feel as though I was allowed one more treat of a book.

As critisism I'm sorry to say that I feel it a shame that you did not appear to allow Hermione a more mature sense of self in dealing with deep emotions, I know women do not have to fall to pieces and become immature children desperate for male protection and I did find this somewhat incongruous with the most brave, utter selfless courage displayed by Hermione in all of the books, so I failed to recognise alot of her character in your rendition. I feel it does do a disservice to young women to apply this subserviant form of female role model, it is quite proscribed and also peturbing that this behaviour is still put forward to men to be attractive. This is a myth and could really do with being dissolved in order for a more mutually emotionally equal form to emerge.

Post war heroines in reality as a rule tend to be more self-possessed, self-assured and reality hardened and I would also guess that Snape would have found a quietly dignified strong young woman truely intreguing and potentially attractive compared to the character presented to him in the form of your Hermione.

Keep up the wiriting, you obviously have quite a talent and I'll look forward to reading any more you submit.

Wonderful wonderful wonderful! I laughed. I cried. This is, without a doubt, the best fanfic I have ever read.

OH MY FRIGGIN' GOODNESS! I absolutely loved it! The jokes, the plot, and most importantly, the characters! Snape was written perfectly as were Harry and Hermoine! It took me over a week to read it and is the first ever fanfic that I'm going to write up as a 'book I read' in my reading journal (don't ask, it's a thing I have...).

Thank you for this great story! Are you a published author? You should be!

Can't wait to read more of your work.

Sincerely,

BellaD

Ok so im not done the the chapter but as soon as i read the part with the truth serum (which was just now) i was like "i see now!"
I might be wrong, but with snape's behavior and the truth serum... She could say that he didnt love her and her thinking that... I think i understand! Lol sorry, i just had to say

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Such a wonderful story!

I have to say that, usually, I don't like long stories, but YOUR story was such an experience that I'll have to reconsider! I loved, loved, LOVED how you described Severus' personality. I mean, on most stories, authors make him so experienced and sexual and I just hate that, but you made him so inexperienced, awkward and new to the experience of love, which is exactly how I imagine Severus to be. I have to say I liked very much his interactions with Hermione, how their feelings seemed to flow smoothly from a student-teacher relationship to love, and the closure with Ron, because he deserved his happy ending too! Absolutely beautiful!

I would like to see more stories about this couple from I have to ask: Is a sequel, or even just some sort of epilogue, completely out of the question?

Congratulations,

SillyJessy

This story is absolutely gorgeous. It kept my attention till the very end. Snape is my favorite character and just...to see such dynamic was amazing. Thank you for this incredible story; you should be very proud.

By the way, I am impressed by your writing style. Sophisticated in a personal way. Very vivid and unique.

Awe Severus proposal was soo cute! I loved this story, it's simply amazing!

that was perfect :)

Oh my god I loved this whole story it was absolutely brilliant from start to finish. Every chapter had me hooked. I can't wait to read the epilogue/sequel.

Well done.

Thank you for writing such a sweet and genuine romance! I thoroughly enjoyed all the nuances of your very believable characterizations of Hermione and Snape. Well done!

I AM SO SORRY! I read this the minute you updated (BECAUSE I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH AND I KNOW ABOUT WHAT TIME YOU USUALLY UPDATED AT) but I didn't have time to review until now! I LOVE YOU! It was brilliant! Wonderful! & I loved every minute of reading your work! This story HAS to be the best one I have ever read on here which makes you the best author I have ever read from! Perfect, perfect, perfect! OO OO & I read some reviews and some of them wanted for you to write the wedding. I don't really recommend it... BUT YOU'RE THE AUTHOR! Do what you want! Anywayss, I loved this story! Great job!

OMG I LOVE THE ENDING SO MUCH! :D It makes me happy! 3 SO freakin cute.

This story is absolutely amazing. Definitely one of my favorites. This is one of the few stories that I became addicted to. I mean, I read all 75 chapters in about a week. If that's not addiction, I don't know what is lol

I would love it so much if you wrote a sequel of some sort, but it would also be understandable if you didn't. It would be awesome though ;)

Anyway, excellent job on the story! Absolutely wonderful :D

that was amazing! i positively loved this story, it was very well written and the amount of thought that went into the plot was incredible! keep writing, you have a wonderful talent! :)

OMG I completely and utterly cried! I don't want this story to end, but I know that I'm so close to the finish

AHHHHH! DX