ok when i read that- "pseudo-spirit-sex" i was like "WoW! how did you come up with this type of warning? it's genious! i was between laughing and beeing scared as of whant to expect! then i read the rest of the story and i was like 0.O!

this stuff was great. somehow you found a way to make it hot but still very emotional and sooo not dirty! congrats! keep it up!

wow! amazing! i was really hoping someone would make a fic with this couple! yaaaay you made me so happy! i bet everyone says it and i'll just add but it's true you stayed so well in character! i loved every freaking word. nice dialogue too! will you write more?

oh yes..i also imagined just like that the way these 2 would see each other..bet farqual must have felt quite betraid in the end when barti actually stopped his plan!

still an amazing story!

yikes i'm such a pervert!

mooooaaaar please!

oh yeesss! you made my day! i soooo wanted to read something like that! it's brilliant how you managed to stay in character and pull this off! i'm not exaggerating when i say i was amazed! nice idea! and your way of working with it!

nyaaaa i simply loved this! you should write more! pleaaaaaaaase write more!

love ya! wish i could send you cookies!

very nicely done. You concentrated on a side of Faquarl I've only been able to see briefly, and gave it new depth. I was also really surprised at how strong the uh... sex scene was. It wasn't just parts getting put together with a thin layer of "emotional" content on top to pass it off. It was interesting and new and it made sense and yeah, it was emotional. But you shouldn't use "but" to start a sentence.

Thanks for the story.

If i didn't know any better, i might have thought that i was reading jonathan stroud. Enough said.

Wow, that was REALLY well done. I was expecting something weird that might make me cringe but no, I got this and it was beautiful even if that sounds strange. Spot on personalities and loved LOVED bartimaeus in this. Great, just great.

Uh. Okay. Um... wow.

So that was just... amazing. I loved it. You know, I think the one thing that would make Stroud's books better is if he included a little bit of swiving here and there, especially if he writes it like that (oh God but that's disturbing now). Beside the point, though. You write Bartimaeus as if you've captured him and forced him to write out what happened last night. I felt like I was actually reading it from a book. Gahhhhhhhh this is getting simpering but seriously. I loved it. Every word. Bartimaeus/Faquarl is my secret pleasure.

Yes. That was good. /understatement

Very very good. For the sake of my sanity Ill not think of that as actual sex but it holds the same pleasure and intamacy and more of that so yes so perfect. All very in character imo and I wouldn't change a thing :)

Im so glad RoS came out more people are writting about Faquarl! Always loved him

It is a very good story.

And I like the pairing too. BartXFaquarl moe! :3

super well written and in character. Kinda creepy but that's what makes it so good.

Why is it that the best writing for this series is almost overlooked? This is an excellent story. Beautifully written, an interesting concept, and very definitely in character despite the oddity of the pairing. Good work.

Awesome, great story. Bartimaeus and Faquarl are my favourite characters and you got their personalities and banter down brilliantly. I hadn't imagined anything like that going on between them but now I wished I had!

Well written, creative, and full of emotion! I love this fic, especially because of the deeper meaning that it gives to the scene in the third book where they face off for the last time. I just can't help but tear up when I read the line, "Kill all the magicians then. I'll help you," since in the end, Bartimaeus chooses to fight him instead.

I also love the inner turmoil that Faquarl has about Bartimaeus and your description of how the two were different. It just seems to fit into his personality to secretly envy him, even when his logical self is trying to shut these thoughts down.

I have to admit that I didn't get the Faquarl/Bartimaeus before this fic, but this has definitely made it appealing to me! All in all, loved the writing and the storyline!