TT_TT I LOVE THIS STORY

It is quite a good story. I spotted a spelling mistake here and there, likely you missed them in the final check. The story feels a touch fast but might be just me, I am particularly fond of longer chapters. Keep up the good work and update soon.

This story is becoming interesting.

Seems that peorth and Kyo are bonding well i am curious as to is observing them update soon!

Was that Belldandy or Lind that was watching in the beginning? Or was it Mara?

I too am a fan of Peorth, i spotted some grammar issues, but i was also wondering will Keiichi and Belldandy be featured? Also will Urd and Skuld appear later too, It would be nice to see Urd flirt with Peorth just to see how she feels about it. Any way looking forward to the next chapter!

Always did like Peorth-centered stories. Hope to see more.