good story

Well...I have to say this was a very lovely one-shot, if a bit rough due to a few minor grammatical and structural goofs. Honestly don't remember Luke being near-fatally injured during "Courtship of Princess Leia" (the reference to Dathomir and Nightsisters) unless it's part of the post-New Jedi Order novels...but I definitely felt you created something great in having Luke give his father a serious chance to alter future events :D

You know, I never reviewed this story. So here it is: Great job! Awesome and I love it! Keep writing stuff like this, ok?

Another oneshot that has great chances at expanding more.

Good work on explaining how Luke died. Force Ghost time traveling is a first. You sir are a master of time traveling stories

Interesting one-shot. :)

Ooh, this was really nice.

WRITE ON!

Oneshot? Oneshot? but that so begs for a sequel... Will Ani finally make the right choice? And what will their life be like afterward? Please, this is a great prologue to a great family AU, please pretty please? :)

More?

Love

Mireille

Hmmm...shows potential.

I really liked this, very heartfelt. Great job. :)

:D, best way to convey my thoughts.

Another wonderful story/one-shot, I must say! I don't know why, but I just love stories like this, especially when it's well written, which this was! :D

I love it! Brilliant job!

I just loved it!

i really enjoyed that! would you consider extending it a few chapters to see what anakin would do next? great either way :)