I think this chapter and the epilogue could be improved by adding more about their bond.

I just loved this story. I look foward to reading more. I have added it to my favorite.

Thank you starstuff

Well done! I loved every minute of it. Well written, thoughtfully plotted, delightfully characterized. Looking forward to your other works!

Lady P

Just came across the story, and I loved the prologue. Trick candles, a hilarious picture. I wish I had time to read the rest now, but I'm off to class. Great story. I can't wait to see where it progresses to.

This is my second review but I have to say this story is great! I'm glad you finished it and I hope to read more of your stories soon!

Oh wow!Thats all I can also excellent!Amazing!This is one of my favourite T/T fanfics EVER.

Please let there be a !

That was truly awesome! I loved this story and its pacing was perfect. It is kinda sad to say that to date, the show has not been as good as this story was. Maybe they will get there though. Please take all the time you need before writing another story, we will wait for you. Once again great story and thank you soo much for writing it.

Thank you for a great Enterprise story, the best I've come across.

:) *giving standing ovation* Zane, you did an incredible job with this story and I want to ecourage you to keep writing, you have a definite knack for writing. You have researched this very well and I look forward to reading all your future stories!

Zane, I don't even know if this is *possible*, but the last chapter and epilogue may have been even more amazing than the chapters before them!

I have been avidly following this story since you posted the first part, and I must say it was an honor to read this as it was written part for part; as you stated, WIPs are seemingly harder to write, but you have achieved great results with this story. I also loved the foreshadowing you provided thought the story - it was subtle and the end results were farily unexpected, wonderfully done! As I'm fairly new to the Trek universe I didn't catch it all, but from what you've said in the endnotes I can see how it is all pieced together...flawless.

I'll be looking forward to the next story you write, but feel free to take as much of a holiday as you want, you more than deserve it after writing this awesome story! :-

Undeniably worth the wait. The wait between the chapters added a hint of desperation to my reading, as I would read through the same chapter over and over, attempting to decipher which way you would next take the plot.

I hope to read much more from you in the future...

Holy , that was AMAZING! That was wonderful. Best fanfic I've ever read. WOW!

YAY!

Zane, this story freakin' rocks! You ought to be patting yourself on the back. With both arms.

*the audience breaks out into applause and cheers*

Well done! A great finish to a great story.

AHHHHH! I just can not wait until you post the next chapters! I LOVE this story. I can't wait to read the rest of this story and your future work