I love this, love this, LOVE this! So beautifully written and I got one hell of a kick out of T'Pol going to Trip and declaring her love for him to bring him back. Ah, my shippy little heart did backflips! Thank you so much, Ali D :)

Okay, that puked...

Hey, come on! You've got to tell about what happened to led up to this point! There's an entire story missing here, you gave us the epilogue kind of thing. I demand you tell the story of Trip being taken and tortured and brainwashed and then murdering crewmembers and trying to get the captain before he's finally stopped by T'Pol's quick reflexes... ;)

Pretty good. I liked the idea, but I had hoped you would expand why they had started to feel these things and exactly what had happened to Trip and the others. Good job!

This is really good...how about a follow-up? With nightmares or something?

Great story, looking forward to more of your work.

I enjoyed this story, and I hope to read more of your work soon! :-