Oh no, what happens next?
I love this show. I've been watching it on YouTube. Dash is my favorite character.
I'm thinking of writing some fan fiction of "Eerie, Indianna" myself.
Love your use of words and character expressions. Very realistic!
I feel like I'm back in Eerie.

Great fic! I actually read up to chapter 17 of this posted on the LJ community, but it was easier to comment here.

The fic is awesome, the characterizations are fantastic, and I am loving every chapter. I hope that when you have some extra time you will continue on it!

oh Mars and his files.

He will have files one day!

love your descriptions of the Bureau. And Marshall trying to make the map. And Dash's insistence that he's been helpful being rebuffed by the fact that he generally is the one that causes the trouble first, so spot on :)

(I'm pretty sure that sentence is grammatically atrocious, sorry!)

Love this fic so much!

I love your descriptions, they're so detailed and vivid :)

Oh, the Tellers.

Of course, knowing Eerie's strange effect on...almost everyone besides Marshall, Simon, and Dash, their response to being told about the land of the lost could just as easily be a bored "That's nice dear," and a later conversation about what an active imagination Marshall has.../ramble

Love this chapter!

You write Dash and Mars so, so perfectly.

man, I love this story!