|Reviews for May I|
| Kahlanmausi 2/26/13 . chapter 52
. ! I really do. It's so great written and is awesome! :) There were many moments I was like: "No! Please not!" like the one with the car crash or when you told us that Sophie had a hole in heart.
I'm really glad that Gillian "won" against her PTSD. And I loved i when Cal brought her home, whether she wanted this or not. :D
Your story really is so great and I like your writting-style! :)
Keep going on like this. :)
| KarenJC 1/28/13 . chapter 52
Many, many thanks for the update my lovely xxxx As saddened as I was to read "complete" after it, I just made me realise what a truly lucky person I've been to read it xxxx Your vocabulary usage has been inspirational. Your characterisation spot on. I'm not ashamed to say that I've shed more than a tear or two reading chapter after chapter. They have been both tears of sadness and joy. The whole thing has been so very,very real to me. I will be forever thankful that I found the #TeamKelli up the courage to sign on. Because of it I have so many,many special people in my life that I didn't have before. You being one of them xxxxx
The joy,honour and privilege has been all mine.
Thankyou so very,very much once again xxxx
Lots of Love and Best Wishes xxxx3
| SassyCop 1/27/13 . chapter 52
Beautiful job! Looking forward to your sequel...
| Emmaline93 1/27/13 . chapter 52
You were right, I didn't expect it, but I loved every minute of it! I love Gillian and Sophie's interactions, they're so natural. Like even though they don't have each other completely figured out, they fit. I can't wait to see how their relationship builds further. And, the dancing, *sigh* they should have danced more often in the show, it was perfect. That whole scene was so vivid in my mind, I could visualize the whole thing. Kind of made me think of the scene in Canary's Song, with the soft music, close proximity, and you totally think they'd kiss if the screen didn't go black. Well, this was that kiss... to me at least... You did and amazing job, and highly looking forward to the sequel.
P.S. what was the song? It sounds perfect, I'm just curious to hear it.
| LieBones 1/27/13 . chapter 52
So beautifully written, the last two sentences are the perfect way to end this chapter of their lives. I have reread those last three paragraphs several times. They wrap up a long journey for them and leave so much promise for what lies ahead of them as they begin life truly as partners now in every sense of the word. Like I said before I plan to reread May I in its entirety as I wait for "All This Time" and you venture on to other stories that await your muse. Know that your talent and late nights have been appreciated.
| Shepherdinha 1/27/13 . chapter 52
Great ending! Good work all the way:)
| HalleyFarrot 1/27/13 . chapter 52
this was an incredible ending. the dance scene is breathtaking. " lips locked together until long after the music ended" ahhhhhh I'm still having a hard time sorting through my emotions with this last line : D This story brought so many smiles in my face, tears in my eyes and warmed my heart in so many many ways! love love the ending, looking forward on the sequel! thenk yew, thenk yew so much! mission accomplished! *salutes* Chief : D
| HalleyFarrot 1/26/13 . chapter 51
This chapter is so light and very heartwarming, I love picturing Cal and Sophie's moment, so adorable. Gill needs lots and lots of hug and comfort. I enjoyed the deepness of the characters, the underlying themes, and the emotions that this fic provokes. just wonderful. I really enjoyed reading MI I don't know whether I should cry or be happy at the same time because there's only one more chapter left. Told yah BITTERSWEET! Sorry if my grammar is all crappy, For I cannot see through the layer of tears in my eyes (I'm blaming it all to the tears! LOL) I'am happy and sad and worried and excited how this will end. thanks so much for this wonderful piece.. One More! : )
| KarenJC 1/24/13 . chapter 51
I LOVE the tenderness you expressed in this chapter my lovely. Both have been bottling up their emotions in one way or another. Slow and steady has definitely won the race3 They are just so comfortable around each other. Words aren't needed,the mere presence of the other calms them. Cal and Sophie sat at the table was a cute scene. No doubt turning back the years for Cal. The comedic element at the end of the chapter was a master stroke too xxx
Many,many thanks once again sweetie xxxx
Lots of Love and Best Wishes xxxx3
| Velmster93 1/24/13 . chapter 51
You did an amazing job! I can really picture it all as I'm reading. The paragraph with Gillian sleeping and waking up wondering where Sophie is was classic, it actually happened to me a couple times while I was watching my friend's little cousin. She was like 2-3 years old, and just got up and went to play with her toys in the other room. I asked her why she went to the other room and she told me "you were sleepy. I not wake you." Can't wait to read how you end it.
| LieBones 1/24/13 . chapter 51
So many different threads here to wrap up in a chapter...I can't wait to read the last chapter and plan to reread while you are working on other things. I am looking forward to you getting back to Jackie :)
I love that they are being so straight forward and honest with each other right now. I must say I am worried how talking with Elena will effect her...when she herself has so many things to talk out.
I love scenes with Cal and Sophie, he is a natural with kids which is funny considering some of his personality traits. The natural and logical choice for Sophie's dad!
| solveariddle 1/20/13 . chapter 50
First of all - losing what you already had written because your old computer crashed - that's bad! All the better that you still somehow managed to write this lovely chapter. I really like the quiet interaction between Gillian and Cal. Not much is said, but you can feel the strong bond between them with every word and every action. I hope he finds her so they can talk some more...
| KarenJC 1/16/13 . chapter 50
After reading a chapter of your story,I'm filled with love and warmth from the words that are dancing there in front of my eyes :) You capture all the complexities of these two wonderful characters I said in some so complex,in others so very other words so very real 3
The Emily/Sophie scene was so very me of the time my two used bake together when they were younger:) Emily bless her is the linchpin that's holding these two 's trying to steer them towards their path with destiny,by dropping subtle hints here and question is,will these pick up on the clues and act? Answers very shortly I'm guessing;)
Hopefully Cal will catch up to Gillian and they will sit down and have a chat. Communication is a wonderful thing. The attic is an inspired choice to have Gillian retreat to. Old memories stored there and the possibility of new ones being formed? ;)
Many,many thanks once again my lovely xxxx I know I do like to prattle on,but when something is this good things need to be said xxx
Lots of Love and Best Wishes xxxxx3
| LieBones 1/16/13 . chapter 50
Poor Gil so overwhelmed but she just can't wrap her brain around letting Cal help her. Cal needs to go find her and then cuddle her up until she can find the words to talk! Not sure that she could resist him if she found herself in his arms. Can't wait for the next two chapters :)
| solveariddle 12/28/12 . chapter 49
Over Christmas, I read the story. So, this review is kind of a "wrap up" and refers also to the previous chapters. ;) Considering how it began (Gillian dealing with the aftermath of her attack), this story took a completely unexpected turn with everything that happened (esp. Sophie). Curious to find out how it all ends.