Wow. That's all I can say. This is absolutely incredible. People have told me I'm a good author for my age, so maybe that's why I'm picky when it comes to fan-fictions. Most fan-fictions: I end up clicking away from them, disgusted. This one was absolutely perfect. I would ask for more chapters, except that it would ruin it. Keep writing.

That was incredibly depressing...but good.

Wow, that was great. Velma likes Shaggy! I think she must let him know. Shaggy and Velma are so different from ordinary people, and that makes them perfect for eachother. I enjoyed your story. I wish you would write a second part to it.

Cool story! Is that the end or is there going to be more? I don't know! I'm really stupid! Probably because of all the drugs. Oh well, See ya later dawg!

I liked this, even though I don't have much interest in Scooby-Doo. I prefer slash (which there's none of, it seems) but this was well-written, and I liked it. Bloody tired. Can't sleep till seven AM. Bye.

Yay! Things are okay now!...well, not really, I'd guess. (If Velma's really

down, it wouldn't be resolved so quickly)

But this is good.

Sequel?

Schiz

Aw, I liked this. Some nicely written angst (and I love angst :D). And besides, Shag/Vel is my favourite pairing in the SD universe. Okay, shameless promoting... Since I would presume that you are implying Vel may like Shag, maybe you'd join my wee li'l clique? :) unintended

Okay, I'm done now. I really liked it! Yeah... I'm really done now ;

_ That was great! I love little introspective pieces. I wrote one sort of like this, for Harry Potter, when I was into that.

...Aaanyway, this was really cute. I like the angst at the begining, that made it more interesting to read. I can definetly see how Velma would think that.

Maybe you should write a companion fiction about how it all plays out, with it ending up Shaggy/Velma and Daphne/Fred, but with angst in it. Definetly angst. It sounds as if it would be good. Just a suggestion. Heh.

Kudos!

-Leah-

. . . Awwwwwwwwwwww! _ Very good fic! Insightful too. Me likey! *gives author chocolate cupcake* I salute you!

Awwwwe, I'm not really into Scooby-Doo, but this was cute, me like it. :-)

This is good. I like Shaggy and Velma. They're so different, they're perfect for each other.

Ooh! Venturing out of the Ducks-verse, I see...well, I really like this! Scooby Doo is my favorite cartoon, and Velma was always my favorite character, way better than too pretty Daphne. Interestingly enough, I was playing a card game with my friend today, and the cards had the Scooby Doo characters on them...and I commented on how Velma MUST have had a crush on Shaggy. Yeah, random piece of information. I really like this story, and I HOPE you're planning on continuing!

-The Vick-meister

That was so sweet. You should add some more on and make it into a longer story. :) Nice work!

Very good job! It's too true with Fred and Daphne! It's so painfully obvious! I guess they're too frightened to admit it. I mean Fred was about to in 'Scooby-Doo and the Witch's Ghost' but he weaseled his way out of it. *laughs* I'm guessing the guy Velma likes that thinks with his stomach is Shaggy, right? I think they work well together too. Anywho, great story! Keep writin'!

This rocks!

-Erica