 MaraudingSnitch1314 11/15/11 . chapter 1Nicely written and, I think, a pretty realistic conversation between Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs. I would love to read a longer version of this story detailing the events of this particular full moon. :) |
 MixItUp 8/5/11 . chapter 1Yay for dedications!
I really liked this. It was simple, but it got your meaning across. Favorite line: "Peter lay awake, left in the company of his own uselessness."
I think Sirius was really good in this, too. Obviously, he wasn't the focus, but he seemed very...much like Sirius. Oh yeah, I totally worded that well. I liked your insight on James's place in the group, as well. |