Nicely done. :) I see that your writing skills are improving dramatically. Great job!

Could amnesia be a possibility?

Oh, I'm getting ahead of myself. I need to let the chemistry between these characters sink in a little.

This is quite good! I like it a lot!

Ha, ha.

The prologues are always short, aren't they? I won't let that fool me! I'll keep on reading!

(I wish I can say the same about the people who've read my Crisis of Faith story. BAWL!)

(All right, I didn't come here to whine. Ahem! Focus, Lulu, focus...great potential here...excellent start, really...)

I like the story so far. It seem that Mui has lost her memory during the flood.

Please update soon I dying to know what happen next.

Girl that was awesome the thrill is so (well thrilling I should say but) awesome yet I can't imagine what will happen to that peacock next well have to wait next time

What took ya so long? This is the best chapter I ever read. Please post more. I want to know what happens to Shen! Also, feel free to check out most of my recent KFP fanfics. Including my latest one: 'A Tiger Cub's Horrifying Secret'. Feel free to read and review, add to favorites or subscribe.

-AniUniverse '05 (aka A.U. '05)

well, that was a cute chap. the describing was good, and the characters are well- presented. i will keep up with your work.

PURE AWESOMENESS!

Peace out.

love it man update soon!

OMFG Shen just recovered what will happen! Can't wait for the next chapter

A peahen wow never thought of that awesome creativity girl keep it up

Memories hmmm does seem thrilling

Shen's in Tian Shen Village? I'm thinking that the village is named after Shen. So, I can't wait for this next chapter!

-A.U. '05

Love it man ;D update soooon!

wonderful chapter

Mui is Shen's girlfriend, right? And if it is not, then tell me who she is.