I... I LOVE THIS! *;^_^;* It's unfair how some people hate Tamahome just because of his character... I think that that kind of dislike is what you could call depression and envy. Tamahome is a great person!

~Mira

Heh, read all 5 ch. in one sitting. Good stuff goin'. I never saw chiriko in that light before. wow. You really have a knack for bringing out the inner pain and mixxing it with their hopes. You're an amazing writer. Suddenly my story seems lifeless, (even though it's only the first chapter) Perhaps you could tell me how to improve it?

I'm not a big fan of Miaka.I can't hate her and I can't really have the feeling of liking her either.But she is the herione of the series and explaining each and one of the Suzaku of why they are so devoted to miaka was a good idea.Nuriko is a good example to start off. I like it. ^_^

this one definetly makes up for the hotohori one! i loved this one best (then chiriko's then all the rest). mitsukake's always been a mysterious character and i'm glad someone other than me thinks that he's quiet because he feels like he doesn't deserve to be a sieshi. you really got his character across very well. keep it up can't wait for chichiri's. if you did mitts this well chiri's is bound to be amazing. you're one amazing author.
~Tenshi K.~

this was an amazing depiction of hotohori! you did a good job on his character for someone who isn't a big fan of his. i like the way you don't make him sound too weak but you also don't make him sound too strong. keep going! you can write chichiri,you're good.
~Tenshi K.~

wow... you're really good. the words don't do your stories justice but i have to type them. amazing story. you portayed chiriko very well. you let him be him instead of the little boy in the shadows everyone else writes him as, an adult lost in the body of a boy (or a boy lost in the mind of an adult whichever you like best).it's nice to read a story from his perspective, especially one as well written and poetic as this one. keep this fic going!
~Tenshi K.~

Having stumbled into your Nakago and Soi story by accident and having loved it, I've decided to poke around the rest of your stories as well. You've captured the inner emotions of the seishi perfectly, and given them something that makes them seem real. You've delved into the inner thoughts of something that we must remind ourselves is two dimensional, and made it somehow even more interesting than before.

I'm looking forward to seeing the others, especially Tasuki.

For now, I'm bookmarking this. Expect to have me back ^_^

Peach

Oh dear, I'm afraid I missed this when you posted it. First of all, the necessity: *Big Hug* I tried emailing you a couple of times, but I don't know if you ever recieved the emails. *Shrugs, hugs again anyway* I missed you and your writing. ^_^
This is a beautifully written chapter, Chaos-chan, and I do believe that you are such a wonderful author. Your word choice is impeccable, and you make everyone see that Mitsukake is important for something other than just healing the seishi or other people. Nobody really bothers to delve into his past, or that he does blame himself for so many things that happen, and doesn't let those emotions show often, if ever. You have such a talent for making people see something from a new angle, and I'd just like to say congratulations on another chapter well done. ^_^ Faithful fan,

~Midnight.Star~

oopsy!! gomen nasai....my other review seemed like i didnt read all of the chapters when in reality i did. and i luved them...except for hotohori's. it just doesnt exactly suit him.....i dont know y. ja ne no da!

hi again!! wow!! that is all i can say! its amazing how u can write their story like that. i am truely amazed. not that i doubted your ability as a great authoress at all of course.=^-^= those that i read were sooo emotional and so realistic that i can imagine it actually happening to real people. i wonder how tasuki's and chichiri's will come out. i hope u write theirs soon. oh.. and thank you for thank me in your author's note. i didnt expect it at all! arigato!!!

OIY!! I went back and read nuriko's again. You're author's note on that one just stopped my heart again. It's beautiful without being corny. A rare gift in the fy universe. ^_^. Well, I'm off again to find more worthwhile fanfics and I thank you for writing such a worthy fic. Take care.

...wow... this one was powerful. (I hope you write tasuki's with this kind of passion! lol) And hey! I'm fifteen too, and I can't say that I've ever fallen in love yet. lol. Sadness... I was reading the others before this and they were good. But this one, I could totally feel your feelings being slapped in here. It seriously feels like you've delved into Tamahome and figured him out. Inside and out. Cant wait for more.. now if you don't mind, I'm off to read the next chapters. lol. PS: that last line kicked @s5k1e. It's the kind of power in writing that makes people's heart stop.

*on the brink of tears* oh my god.... I love these! They're so good! *sniff* I really hope you get the next chapter out soon! Lesse, who's left? Tasuki and Chichiri, I believe, right? Keep writing!

Chao-chan, once again you have taken my breath away. I completely agree with you on your reading of Mitsukake: he always feels the guilt even if he doesn't say it, it's always "his fault," even when in reality there was nothing he could do. And he can definitely be very witty when he wants (the line "Heika, you have a way with men" from episode 20 comes to mind). As a Mits-supporter, I love this. People tend not to remember that he's a complex character with thoughts and emotions since he doesn't come out much during the story, but I think you've captured him perfectly here. And your idea about being hated for saving lives... Like many things you come up with, I've never seen that before, but it makes so much sense that I'm starting to call myself a dolt for not imagining it sooner. Keep writing these wonderful vignettes; I can't wait for the next one.
And I promise promise PROMISE that when I get the time I'm gonna go through and read your other stuff! I swear it! School's just eating my time at the moment, I can barely WRITE stuff let alone read --;;; And about the review on Roku-chan's CS, sumimasen, gomen nasai. You're a cool person. ^_~ That was my mouth and brain and fingers acting stupid.

Nicely played! I love how you play out the personailty of the characters! Very well done. I hope to see more soon. Till then, bye