 hypnoticeyes 10/31/11 . chapter 1I've seen this Hans von Hozel setup all across SSVM recently. Could you explain exactly what the genesis of it is? |
 Thyra10 10/30/11 . chapter 10Hehe, nice recap of what Hot Shot is all about :-) |
 jtedrick1 10/30/11 . chapter 10So many truths has this story. Much the goodly in it is describe!
Creepy was the brother-cousins and grand-uncle-dad's.
Danube! |
 hummingbirds2 10/30/11 . chapter 10A Hans von Hozel explaining - wonderful - but even HVH cannot make Hot Shot any less creepy, in fact it may even add to it. Suddenly, inbreeding - eeeek! I adore the wookie description (I always wondered what Jason looked like when he changed - now that image will stick with me!) And the dialogue - ow - superb! :) |
 Duckbutt 10/29/11 . chapter 10Great to see more von Hozel.
No matter how Hot Shot is played up, there is great ick and stay-away factor...just much weirdness..
Pat |
 Titanium White 9/17/11 . chapter 9I know reviewings past say same- but "Suddenly semen" make many laughings for me!
Bubba make good contraceptive for sex avoidance- he solution to teen pregnancy! |
 Team Jane 9/11/11 . chapter 9My eyes drifted over and over to the Suddenly semen. That is the best HVH line ever! Congrats! |
 AudraLeeony 9/9/11 . chapter 9I have to tell you, I read these to my hubby every week, and he just asked me to re read chapter 9 to him. Loved it all the way! |
 Studiokmt 9/6/11 . chapter 9"Suddenly semen!" The best line ever! ROTFL! You made my day. |
 jtedrick1 9/6/11 . chapter 9"Suddenly semen!"
OMG I think the neighbors probably heard me laughing. |
 hummingbirds2 9/6/11 . chapter 9This reader be hoping Eric has saved up some sticky for Sookie for the last two books in the series as well? Suddenly semen - probably the best line ever. And I loved the story-so-far summing up at start - such the long sentence, but so succinctly! |
 Thyra10 9/6/11 . chapter 9Haha! That sums up book 3 so very well :-)
As usually very funny :-D |
 walshgirl 9/5/11 . chapter 9Just brilliant! |
 Gjers-1 9/5/11 . chapter 9"Suddenly semen!"
*suddenly snort water threws nose*
Reader wistful looking for the fix deflated boner and gets more sticky. *drooly* |
 Jadajuice 9/5/11 . chapter 9This was THE funniest yet ! you crack me up! thanks! |