I found I could read the first few sentences of the paragraphs and still get a gist for the story. It seems rushed, and for a T story, felt a little on the M side. If you make this into a multi-chapter story, please re-read this chapter, find a beta, and edit for chopiness.

Good luck, happy writing.

It was brilliant, I love this ship :D Please write more, or put on the 'other' version, I would love to read them :)

There's a porn version of this story?

please write another i absolutely loved it! :)

This was a great story would love to read the other one.

good story

What is the other version?

great story, one of the best true grit stories ive read. I agree with you one the whole not having enough in the movie. Also i would differnly like to read the other verions lol

great story, one of the best true grit stories ive read. I agree with you one the whole not having enough in the movie. Also i would differnly like to read the other verions lol

GO FOR IT! make it multichapter!

Hello again! I wanted to ask if you could please put on the other version of this would be really great!

very good i always see them together, him handsome but a man who nee a women to challenge him, and her a woman who need a man who was not afraid of her and can sepeek his mind and stand for it. continue it's good

Well...um...maybe it's going a bit to fast...? I love it and it's good but maybe the relationship between the both could have gone a bit slower. Love the plot, the characters, and LaBoeuf's stubble!

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-Mary

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That was awesome!Please continue this.

Wow! That is a very great start - you should continue

Kinda rushed ... You should have lead into the plot more or wait is this a one shot?