Good story. I like that it moved quickly without seeming rushed at all, and that we got a good picture of what all the main characters are like.

My absolute favourite part, however, was Sir Rex's name. That's just inspired!

Nice story. I like the parallells between Sirius' visions and Harry's nightmares. I agree with Christopher that there's potential for more with these characters.

This was really quite excellent. It moved quickly, the action was well paced, and the characters (as always with your stories) were vibrant and sympathetic. I could see a whole series of these characters, to be honest. Nicely done.

loved the story thank you

good story!

interesting, can't wait to see where this one goes.

love it so far keep the story coming thank you