| Reviews for Purity |
|---|
Infinity 4/17/13 . chapter 14 You should make more this is my favorite fan fiction! It's really good! :3 |
Guest 4/3/13 . chapter 14 please, please, please update! I LOVE this story. It's so well written. |
ashthetyto 1/29/13 . chapter 1This story is really good and everything, it's just when you say 'LORD Nyra'... |
Lokifan000 1/11/13 . chapter 14I love this story plz update soon |
daughterofthering 7/7/12 . chapter 14This is really good! cant wait for the next chapter! |
Forever a Savior 7/6/12 . chapter 14This is a pretty great story! It's very unique! It's quite amazing, keep it up! |
Guest 7/6/12 . chapter 14 they may be getting shorter and shorter, yet they are still getting better and better XD. just remember this, it isnt the amount of words that you put into it, it is the style and skill that matters. ur story was just like mine, only 1k chapters... -Wolfsalvo (i will PM you in 2 days, since im away from my personal computer) |
Crazybird101 7/6/12 . chapter 14Yeah... Why DID he come to her? See ya in the next chapter! Peace!;) |
daughterofthering 5/31/12 . chapter 13hi, when will the next chapter be up? i hope you carry on with this book! |
the key 5/14/12 . chapter 1 although it is very good, an owl being pure is nonsense, I didn't like it in the book either. maybe you should make the pure ones betray her. |
Wolfsalvo 5/10/12 . chapter 13ok, im realy tired, so sorry if this review isnt up to normal standards. your story is doing great, you have everything doing good, and it has good backbone structure to it. i have not seen any mistakes in it since i have been reading it, and i end up seeing mistakes in mine more often than not, so that is great. when zara's vision went red, does that mean her eyes turned red, like how the other pure ones eyes are? or how Kludds were at the end of the movie? have a good night/day whenever you read this review. |
GuardianFan-He 5/10/12 . chapter 13If you do not finish this,i will be forced to grab the nearest owl and hit you repeatedly over the head. |
Crazybird101 5/9/12 . chapter 13Gr-Grettir! I-I thought! Is'nt he- I thought Allomere killed him! He even admitted it to Shard when they were fighting! I've played the game so I know whats up. (I personally think Allomere's pretty cool. I got a little sad when he died.) How is he alive! Either Allomere spared his life or he survived the experience and escaped. I also realized something. Are Zara and Shard... siblings? No. They can't be. Zara is a black Barn owl. Dumb thought. Sorry. See ya in the next chapter! Peace!:) |
GuardianFan-He 5/1/12 . chapter 12Great love have a great imagination |
Velvetpru'd 4/19/12 . chapter 12Very good, this story really brings out the good, loving side of Nyra. |