|Reviews for The Foreign Fruit|
| LilttleFreak 9/8/12 . chapter 2
I am so utterly confused... But it was well-written.
| Hevith de Zar 7/19/12 . chapter 2
First of all, I ask an apology for not leave a review by chapter. But honestly I did not see very much needed. I'm not very akin to the adptaciones, or the like, because I always thought that originality comes first and foremost. However, the good adaptations are always welcome (in fact, I am about to do one), and reading fiction you think that was very well written. I found it interesting reading and everything. Only I felt Kisame did not have its well deserved place. His appearances were very brief and limited dialogue. Which, made me wonder what the hell painted in history. But ultimately, I realized that their participation was as important as that of all. However, I left wanting to read some more.
You have in your hands a good plot, great characters and all. I pray that you spend more time and effort, sure sdaldrá better. Good luck, Hevith.
| Guest 7/16/12 . chapter 5
TwT I love this story so much! *has read it three times already* Please continue when you get the chance
| mistykasumi 2/20/12 . chapter 5
Oh, this is a really interesting concept! I'm interested in seeing what you'll write next :)
| FMJ26 11/7/11 . chapter 5
Indeed that WAS a ending me and my kitten didn't thought to happen.
And WTF moment for the random transformation Suigetsu to Katyusha. But well everything is well,...
I'm wondering What's next adventure or mysterie will appear... Hummm
| FMJ26 11/7/11 . chapter 4
Oooh Mein Gott...
When I think this can get more and more mysterious and I can't wait to be solve and the nightmares of the people reveal.
Lol! Jiraya was the epic one. " I'm afraid of women". xD
And the dark secrets of the Braginsky family...
| FMJ26 11/7/11 . chapter 3
Oh my gosh!
Yay so that means you will continue the story, I mean we rlly need more gore things, just saying because I liked this type of stories... a LOT
Then *cracks laughing*
Yohoho Capn' Yao! xD
Ivan as a prince and Toris as a servant. I should have thought that.
Kurenai and her troubles... Ugh like she is the only one that have it and Jiraya being Jiraya.
And mysterious footsteps 0.o
| DeeaE 11/5/11 . chapter 5
| Ghostwiththemostbabes 11/3/11 . chapter 5
This chapter was cool too! Yeah that was a WTF moment but still good! You had me on the edge of my seat with this chapter! I loved it! Can't wait for more!
| Ghostwiththemostbabes 11/3/11 . chapter 4
way cool chapter! This would make an awesome show! I mean if they redid Mononoke with Naruto characters, I would watch it!
| Ghostwiththemostbabes 11/2/11 . chapter 3
Now this one is really interesting! When you described Suigetsu I thought it was Haku from 'Spirited Away' ha don't I feel silly. This is a good start to a new chapter!
| DeeaE 8/26/11 . chapter 2
I love this stufffffffffffffff
| Klavieres 8/10/11 . chapter 2
This is pretty freaky. I'm honestly getting chill bumps. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Guest 8/9/11 . chapter 2
| FMJ26 8/8/11 . chapter 2
TvT Too sad but it have to be done.
Sad and dramatic. How do make that? Well this chapter was sad from the beginning to the almost ( you think I will say the end) when I read that SasuNaru scene all the sadness was gone...for awhile.
Kakashi I told you don't rape him and you did it.
I'm going to k-
Kakashi: No. You told me what you were thinking to me to do...So that means you were thinking in rape.
No! Argh let's just stop talking nonsense.
And poor Naruto I just hope for you to recover from that terrible experience.