AMAZING! Update doon!

Intense! I got chills when Perry got captured. The truly evil Dr. D is scary. You write him nicely :) Terrific job! Update when you can.

This will be a good story.

:DD

This is terribly brilliant.

Wow. Really dark, but still great.

Poor Vanessa. I wonder why Doofenshmirtz cracked so bad.

Whoa. This is amazing. I was kinda mad Vanessa wasn't in the movie, because the wiki page said she was, but this is certainly better. I hope this is not the last chapter.

i like this story it was well written and fit the characters

Is it weird that I had thought of something similar to this after watching the movie?

Ah well, you wrote it one million times better than anything I could've ever written. You really got the dark atmosphere of the other universe, along with the characters. This is definately going into my favorites. :D

This was great! Really well written, and I prefer your version of Alt. Doofenshmirtz's back story- much darker (Plus, I did wonder where Vanessa was in the other dimension). I liked how you went between several characters in this too. I feel bad for Perry though.

Keep up the amazing writing!

I really like your take on why alt universe Doofenshmirtz is so evil. :)

And your writing flows very smoothly. Great job!

I read your story and was rendered speechless.

Luckily, because of the way I was holding my iPod, my thumbs were unaffected.

All I can say is HOLY CRAP WHAT AN AMAZING STORY.

Well done!

Very interesting. I like this a lot, especially your writing style and your take on 2nd Dimension Doofenschmirtz and his past. Keep up the great work :)

For a K story, this is very dark and a little sad. I'm surprised that there'll be a Phineas and Ferb movie. But for a fic like this, it is as it states, a dark and desolate one. Very good Beverly.