That was good sums up the Man with no Name perfectly

Very well written! This was a very good insight into the character of The Man With No Name and I enjoyed it very much!

Very nice, though it seems more like an essay, or a portrait than, a story. You do a lot of telling, especially at the beginning.

Still I'm not complaining. I love this character. He's probably my favorite fictional character ever.

If you have the time and the desire, you might consider rewording his dialogue a little. I just watched a Fist Full of Dollars and he doesn't really use full sentences too often. Also, he has a bit of a draw to his speech, dropping the "ing" and say'n "ya" or "yer" instead'a "you" and "you're."

"Why are you yelling at this woman?" might be more in character if it was "Why ya yell'n at this woman?"

Thanks for posting this.

8/1o *favourited