|Reviews for Demotivation|
| Victoriousjadefan 4/24/13 . chapter 10
the TAB parts confused me, but overall good writing! i love carnise
| Guest 1/23/13 . chapter 1
lol this is some good stuff keep going
| RomanaLadyPresidentOfGallifrey 8/23/11 . chapter 10
:D most awesomest story ever:)
i liked this :)
| RomanaLadyPresidentOfGallifrey 8/23/11 . chapter 9
"he was sweating bulets" that sentunce made me cringe... :D
| Mudkip8330 8/23/11 . chapter 1
:P This looks great! I want to see Carl failing in writing :D I'm adding this to my favourites for sure! Keep up the great work :D
| Mouldcube 8/23/11 . chapter 9
"reaching the 2 mile mark. Carl and Brian still fought, just reaching the 1.75 mile mark, only a few inches behind the two leaders." 15840 inches? a few? XD just kidding, great story, but I told you I was gonna criticize that bit, so there, done now, I shall run and hide from your wrath...
| MaskedNarnianQueen 8/23/11 . chapter 10
Hey, internet went down last night, so I could finish the story, now I have it's great, and since it's Carl and Denise its got my vote, its great and the characters are dead on, feels like an episode.:)
| Lord Shockwave 8/21/11 . chapter 10
This chapter is in 1 word AWESOME, and im the big bad manager. Well done friend, well done
| RomanaLadyPresidentOfGallifrey 8/16/11 . chapter 5
| Lord Shockwave 8/7/11 . chapter 3
good chapter, i liked it.
| Gigaremo 8/6/11 . chapter 2
Gettin' better, and longer as well which makes a huge difference. I like how our OC's act like the idiots we are XD. Also, ALEX FTW!
| Gigaremo 8/6/11 . chapter 1
Pretty good opening chapter bro. A little... ok, a lot, on the short side, but I like how you've captured the feel of the show and put it into a fic. And my OC has a mohawk XD. Oh, and remember to put OC credits in, nect chapter maybe.