This was really good and seems like it could actually happen.

Is the boy Dennis Creevey? He reminds me of Colin, and it did say his brother had died … I'm reading into this too much. Lovely story, by the way! I never though I'd feel sympathy for Lucius.

Not too bad for a first attempt at Harry Potter story. In fact, I think your story is a good one. I can feel the shame that Lucius feeling and some desperation on his life. I hope you will continue to write more Harry Potter stories. Keep up the good work.

Ooh, intriguing! I like it - a very believable post-War Lucius. Yes, write more - seems like an interesting friendship!