It was good, really good. It should be longer though, I wanted it to keep going :)

lmao..Hughes! He's just great! haha...I can't stop laughing..."Just please, not on the desk" haahha..

*ahem* sorry this is just hilarious!

*wipes tears and tries to sit up* Ohoho, that was far too funny. Nice job

I love you so much for writing this, and I'm currently debating whether or not to start reading through another story of yours since I'm so tired, ha ha.

This was awesome. I mean I just can't be critical of it or anything; I'm too busy giggling like a school girl.

Which is creepy and sombering actually.

But still! I loved this, thanks for writing it!

bad maes. Bad bad maes. I hope gracia punishes him well.

Haha! Hilarious! Don't we all love a drunk Roy? He's a cute drunk! :D

Oh... and ' I hope Gracia kills you," Roy's tone was serious

Irony... o.o" Please tell me you get that..? I'm not the only one, right?

Haha, that was a sweet oneshot. I was expecting Roy to become so drunk he would make stuff up between him and Riza, but what you wrote was fine and I enjoyed it. I love Roy and Hughes' relationship and the fact he thinks Roy should get married. Heehee, this was fun. You should certainly write more!

By the way, when you have these sentences: "Yeap and I'm not a crazy man with a camera," - it needs a full stop at the end instead of a comma, because it's at the end of a sentence, if you get what I mean.

Please write some more. I liked it!