You portrayed the characters' thoughts during the events perfectly. Love it! _ s

I LOVED this! Awesome

Man, this was good. Like, seriously seriously good.

Umm...so this is just fantastic.

I don't honestly think that there's anything more to be said than: fantastic.

You did an amazing job. I'm jealous.

Wow this was really detailed from the movie. Good to know about their thoughts during those scenes :)

Oooh, that was so good! I loved it! Absolutely all of it really rang true, like I was hearing the thoughts of the characters as the scenes played out. I'm so glad you're an Ironman fan too, there's no one I'd rather have write about characters I adore :).

Such a pleasure to read your writing after all this time.

Jay

Wow. That ending? Superb. That's all I have to say. :)

Well, you're right, we definitely don't complain about long chapters! Thanks for addressing all the important parts of the story. And thoughts on predicting the future? Thanks for posting!

Sweeeeet! Dead on in character. and this: "Pepper is going to make him pay, but he kind of likes it when she's bossy." Kind of sums up the whole chemistry.

This was absolutely fantastic. Ive never read anything as engaging, I think. I loved it so much. Expertly written. Bravo!