Oh. My. Gods. Sky pirates never cry, eh? I have been a sky pirate for how long now? This story is the first time I've cried in years. I love it though, saddening, yes, but it is truely a story I can rave as my fave. Congratulations. You're a talented writer and I hope to read more FFXII tales.

Great story. I really liked it

I love the ending! So funny, keep writing!

This was a really interesting read. I loved how you wrote the characters and I'm glad to see that this community isn't dead just yet! I liked the spin you put on the Vaan/Reks scene as well, and I didn't see many mistakes. If I find any, I'll let you know. Good Job! :)