Yay! They went back for the kids! It's been *years* since I last watched that episode, and it still bothers me how they could have left their own children behind like that, whatever the circumstances of their birth. Thank you for fixing it;)

Heyyyyy now you can't end it like that! That's not very nice! :-D Ah well it's an enjoyable story though I"m not particuly a fan of paris and Janeway. Just can't see it. I see them as more Mother son relationship or friends. But great story :)

A great story. Very good.

sweet i love it too. I love reading these kinds of stories. Kat

Awww, that's so sweet! I love it!