Cute! "Mel Gibson is there" LOL! "Wreck the city" is right! Wow!

loved it.

LOL, very cute. I think it's cool to add the flashbacks, but you need to mark them a little better, with lines or something, so their more noticable. Other then that- good job!

Brilliant! lol. This was hilarious. that ending...

"Riggs! Get your foot of the gas. Riggs, damnit. Riggs!"

"Oh Rog, just steer the wheel, will you?"

"Rigs!"

that was funny with a capital F.

Great story, A bit rushed at times though

well i just read your story and since i'm on a Mel Gibson kick i'm going to go and watch the LW series.

oh and do you think you could write a sequal. this was really good.

I like the story, but, what's the timeline there?

I loved this story the first time ... and love it even more the second! Woo-hoo Dag! Thanks for making my day for a second time!

Jes