LOVE IT ! and loved the part at the end with breakeven !

Great :)

I I owned it jack wouldn't have died either. Eric might have... And zoey... And Aphrodite might be ruler of the world... But I digress ;)

D:

I'm reliving the scene again... in Awakened. Poor, poor Jack. And poor, poooor Damien. I just can't believe they let that happen...

This was so well written! Good job. :)

This is very cute. I love the couple and I really can't think of any criticisms :D

-Annie

That was really good! :) Except, i don't ever think of Jack calling Damien 'baby'. But, this is your vision and i respect that... So, yeah. Great job :)