This was realyl cute. I love Mai and, most of the time, I love Naru too. He has his good points.

Should of made him watch Twilight. THEN see his reaction.

kawaii! he really made her dream come true for those two to be together.

MAIxNARU forever!

keep it on!

;-)

Loved it!

So sexy and romantic! I love Naru and Mai, this was a really good story.

didn't need to be more dirty wonderful the way it is

gawsh, I wish I read it slower . but really, NARU IS FOREVER HOT AND AWESOME WITH MAI v

great job! *v*

kyaaaaaa! eventhough it wasn't that smutty it's still very hot. i wish i can see them having a baby after that...kyaaa! _

I love them together

beautiful !

D'awww... bit cliched and would never happen... but that's the whole point.

But to quibble, Naru's bed skills don't seem lacking... previous practice or innate talent?

ARGH! EVEN BETTER THEN THE CLEAN VERISON I LOVE THIS STORY GR8 JOB on both bt wonderful job on this 1 .

Haha yes, if it were any dirtier I might have died xD I still loved it none the less! How we changed the other one into this... haha gotta love out minds! 3