again amazing story!

(R W still wont talk to me... not even in school anymore... ughh she can't even look at me)

sorry again LOVE this!

Good, but the whole interactions with the god thing wasn't needed. It was would have been better without it, but anyway, great song too. I love how you used it.

Shor and sweet. :) Great job here, and good sog choice. :)

Ok...first off this isn't a flame but everytime I give constructive criticism there are some people who are kind of sensitive..no offense to 's got major potential and the song and situation fit would really make it better is elaboration on the scenes,what happened,dialogue..etc.I would lose the abbreviations and the lines in all 's sort of distracting and the magic of a well written story can evoke emotion without shortcuts or to emphasize it through actions and emotions working together.I think other than minor improvements that could be done for characterization this was nicely done.

I love how u used that song off the pokemon soundtrack! I love that song, that's the only reason I bought the CD! That was so great. I loved it!Byeie

You did it, that touched my heart. I loved it. Hope to see more.

OMG...I didn't think I'd cry, but I am! Hrm...the wonders which can make me eyes leak...

Tate-chan

Well, it didn't make me cry. Do I get my money back?