   alowlypotato 5/8/02 . chapter 1Of the stories that I read of yours tonight, I like this one the best. It has a nice stream-of-consciousness quality to it, and that's probably my favorite style of writing. So stop downing yourself! You're better at this than you give yourself credit for. :) |
| Kasman 5/7/02 . chapter 1 Really nice... very moving... more please! |
| Michelle Drake aka Hilary 4/21/02 . chapter 1 great story! Can't wait to read more:D |
| Trice 4/19/02 . chapter 1 Great idea and good writing! This part could definitely use some more chapters... |
| Ash 4/18/02 . chapter 1 Awsome Storie I want more hope to read some of your other stories..
**Gotta Blaze**
*Late*
***Peace...Out*** |
| Becky 4/18/02 . chapter 1 I want more! I'm fed up with this Familiars/breeding cult crap on the actual show, and I love X5 storylines. Keep going! |
| Ashantai 4/17/02 . chapter 1 Ooooh, I like this. I always like stuff that deals with the X5s. I'll be on the lookout for the next chapter! Oh, PS, Jondy's name is spelled wrong. ;) Otherwise this was stupendously awesome and please write more soon, you gotta! PLEASE? |
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