You are a sick individual, I love you

Odd...But entertaining!
Faved and following!

Eh pride that he could actually teach and that she became a great fighter?

I'm just going to say this before R&R'ing this chapter. EDIT. YOUR. PROFILE! Too much information, it takes forever to scroll down to where the stories are, damn it! I don't think I had that many THOUGHTS in the three years you've had an account here.

Hmm, very short, no descriptions of the main character, the changes in POV from third-person-Valen-Dreth-focus to first person Main Character is annoying as it breaks the flow of the story. And personally, I prefer those SI stories where the main character doesn't know what's about to happen, thus is never either forced by fate to not change anything in the storyline or doesn't change the storyline for fun's sake, but hey, it's your story.

Keep writing , i want to see where you'll take it.
Mayhem

..also good work so far

Good story keep on writing!

Oh shit... I'm in the fucking Elder Scrolls...
My reaction would have been the same.

I LOVE THIS STORY! KEEP WRITING! _

Good chapter. Worth the wait...

How did your bags end up in Japan, of all places?! XD

Cute!

You're story is frickin awesome & hilarious :D

dont no wtf just happend but epicness

Even if I have never played an Elder Scroll's game, This was awesome. I thought it was gonna suck at first, but it turned out better than expected so far... xD

... three chapters of no story ... I don't know what to say to that ...,... yeah