Nine'll give you ten that Daniel didn't count on Jack actually being flat-out exasperated about falling back into that same part of the time loop with the half-a-question thing repeatedly. Poor, poor Daniel. *skulks off to laugh self silly*

Brilliant fun!

This...is pure hysteria. I love it. A little confused, though, but I love it anyway. :D

lol very funny hahahaha

LOL! its great! absolutly love it! keep up the good work! I just saw 'Window of Opportunity' the other day and was laughing through the whole thing!

(well maybe not the whole thing but it was good)

-skye

This is a really good story, but one thing bothers me, though. I realize that you weren't going strictly alongside the actual events, but didn't Jack mention something about a world record when they were hitting the golf balls into the Stargate? Anyway, again, good story.

LMAO!

hehe *giggles* loved the froot loops bit! nice one!

I really like the parts you made up. They were perfect. Something I can actually see happening on the show. Which brings me to the next thing-don't write exactly what happens on the show! There was too much of the script. I wanted more of your own writing b/c I thought it was pretty funny. Anyway, good fic and thanks,

jenben

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OH MI GAWD! I can't stop laughing! I loved that episode so much. Love the story too!