Looks good to me! I liked it!

Rayne

Who cares if it took 7 months? Whats important is that you got it out for people to enjoy and ponder.

I really like this and I desire more! I got scared with the no heartbeat and I'm curious if that was a dream, real, a prophecy, what. I can't wait!

wow. that is THE best vampire story i have read on here in fact its in the top 5 best storys i hav read on here eva! i love it and i cant wait for you to update and ho the story goes i CANT WAIT! your a genius! yay :)

If the last chapter didn't get me hooked, this one certainly did.

His reactions are neat touches - the sudden panic at the altered heartbeat, the new power that he got, when he got out of control...

Hah, I love it. You're going to keep on leaving me eager to read more with every chapter.

You really do like supernatural creatures don't you? Your other story it was werewolves and angels, now it's vampires.

Anyways, I'm guessing Penelo from Final Fantasy XII.

Also why would Sora be thankful that there was no lock on the gate, keyblade remember.

Just going to say, vampires and werewolves really aren't my thing, but 'Till November was good so I'm giving this a chance.

STUPID SORA! Didn't your mother ever teach you not to read creepy things written on tombstones aloud?

Loved Vampire Sora!

I love this!

Now that... is one opening chapter I won't be soon forgetting!

Certainly an interesting way of giving Sora his vampiric 'gift'... though he doesn't seem too happy about it.

Wonder what Donald and Goofy will think about it if/when they find out... and how he ended up looking like he does in the beginning.

Hah, you've got a knack for getting me hooked on these stories. I love 'em.