Love this story please update

I really find this pairing interesting, and your story is pretty good too! I hope you give us longer chaps in ur next update, okay?

Kind of doing this backwards by having reviewed the second chapter before the first one, but this story is really good. You should continue it!

I know you haven't updated this in a while by I really hope that you continue it. I think this has real potential to be a fine story.

I found the story interesting so far, but a bit difficult to read. The tone seems rushed, unless you went for that effect deliberately. Also you switch tenses frequently, for example going from "She signaled the servant" to "The Queen then steps out" in the same paragraph, which is highly confusing. It would help to ask a beta-reader to review your work.

i really like, i hope you continue soon!

Uh oh! Bummer for Alice. Oh well, Tarrant will be happy! Good job, can't wait for more! :D

"...After days of searching, her quest led her to a vacant building off a freeway..."

This reference is so out of place considering that Alice lived in Victorian England, before the use of automobiles, and express roads were not called "freeways" in England. Alice would have traveled by rail or coach.

Be careful with modern references in a period piece.

Also, considering Alice's muchness at the end of the movie, I don't think she'd be returning to Underland just to get into a relationship with the Hatter.

Great

MORE MORE MORE! Gosh I love Tarrant's last line I wish he said that in the movie, now that would be awsome. But in the original script Alice and Tarrant were supposed to kiss twice but they took it out:(. Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter and please upload it soon. :)

Nice work

Bon début, vivement la suite ! :-)