That story was pretty good!

awww i love it!

this was soooo cute keep writing _

After reading my story through again, I do realize that I could have added more detail. Without lots of detail, it's kind of boring to read. I'm sorry if you felt like it was boring to read, I should have read it over again before posting it.

I admit I'm not too fond of this one shot because you could have added more detail but other than that it was great.

SnixX321

I agree with the reveiw below this one. The story was way too blunt.

it was very good! but i wish that you used more detail. im sorry but it was very blunt and fast. maybe next time you could and alot my detail and dilouge and more passion into your story.