Love it.

Beautiful...

So sad, but I loved it anyway. You always make me care about the characters in your stories, something that I always enjoy from a good story. I can't wiat to read your next story! Keep it up.

Well, I know next to nothing about Heroes of Might and Magic, but I really, really like this. It's a rather subtle tragedy, and fits well into the noted genres.I couldn't spot any grammar flaws, which doesn't really surprise me. All in all, this is a quality story. As I've said many a time before...

Lieutenant! Engage the fave laser!

Insanely yours,

Heir-to-the-throne

"Prince"

So sad that he couldn't hear her. But then again, he didn't need to.