|Reviews for The Unstable Affliction|
| pseud0zombie 12/29/11 . chapter 5
What a delicious story; is there more? I've got chills, it's so interesting to read all of Theodore's rationalizations, his rage, his confusion...
| jska 10/6/11 . chapter 5
You were wordy, but it works. Are her lips made of cheese or fruit? 'Ripe' is an odd word to use.
| coconaught 10/4/11 . chapter 1
I so far am in absolute LOVE with your writing please never ever stop! I am also a huge Forsaken fan and would love nothing more than to see more stories about the trials and tribulations of Forsaken men and living women.
| apples 9/25/11 . chapter 4
Ooo, murder! I love it when stories aren't afraid to kill off major characters. It's wonderful.
| Mahavia 9/25/11 . chapter 4
As always again a epic chapter from you. I'm looking forward to the next one
| VixenOfTheWolves 8/10/11 . chapter 1
Definitely not written in the same happy tone of the other but still good. I'm curious to see exactly how it ends.