I think you need to continue this :D I love what you have so far. The character's are true to how they are on the show and the storyline is great!

This is great-I love how in-character everyone is, especially Gary. Can't wait to read more! Your Worshipfulness

Aw. I like how she just listened to the rain and heartbeats! So cute!

this is such a cool story. are we gonna find out who that guy was who said he wanted Gary. please update soon cause i can't wait for more

Rocked my socks! I love Gary and Rachel!

I loved it& I want more. And little tip for Gary, he repeats hiself a lot sotry to do that more.

I totally squealed when Gary had his arm(s) around her. Such cute imagery! And how clever! Nina blindfolded but still chipping in to give her two cents about Rachel and Gary. I like this plot, I'm totally psyched about your next update!

OMG!I loved are so cute and I adored the 't wait till the next chapter.

UP-DATE!REAL!SOON!

Oh i just love this! :) it makes me so happy but kinda sad... and ocasinaly scared and i think im gona go read it again beacuse i cant sleep and its realy good... :)

Ooo I'd sort of love to see this overarching plot develop

Great story! Question and Answer was my favorite chapter. Rachel's concern for Gary is so sweet. I loved the line: "The trembling in his hand reminded her that she needed to be strong now. Somehow, the warmth of his hand reminded her that she could." Aww, I just love it!

Here's hoping to see some more Alphas stories from you!

That was a very thoughtful contrast between Agent Sullivan and Wilson. I was really starting to like Agent Wilson, so bummed about his death. Still, I'm glad it impacted Rachel in such an interesting manner that it created such a thought provoking moment for her and Gary. You really kept to their characterizations, especially their interactions with one another, especially the 'trustworthy' aspect.

Thanks for another great chapter!

Yes! New chapter Sohappy! Very sweet, the little "I want you to feel safe with me." from Gary. I like the subject of trust of Agent Wilson and Sullivan. Love your characterization! : D

I really enjoyed your story, it was thoughtful and well written! Can't wait for more )

im simply in love with this story. please update again soon.