This is brilliant, the way you are not scared to kill characters by using guns, things that the creators would never do. Your writing talents are a gift. I hope that it contains the same amount of brilliance ahead!

Hey, I'm on chapter 11 and I am really into this! I noticed you don't have the pokemon glow when they evolve, but itsuits the way you write, to be honest. Only a few story's capture my attention and this is one of 'em!

This is brill so far, I'm only up to chapter 6 and I'm already hooked onto this story, I hope you find the inspiration to complete this so-far-amazing Story :D

Boy, do you update often

While the story itself is lackluster, the narration is reminiscent of the anime. I'm waiting for more.

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A story that isn't too terribly original, but is worth checking out for the interesting narration.