One part was SUPER depressing but I happen to enjoy this part the most.

I love the background information about the brothers and how White casually goes into their lives, as well as the age conflicts.

Also an anti N/White story? WOW. I never though I would ever see that ever...

AH

-ahem- anyway, let me just say that this fic has made me fangasm and cry so hard you don't even know. This is just..disteyeiwrigddjdjdjsosible;;;;

Sorry! Ehehe... My favorite bit was when Nobori was sick, oh goodness that was almost as cute as the kiss I would love if you made another one shot for that one \\\

Holy cheese, do people actually... Do that? Do they really make White give up her dreams and whatever? O_o That's insane... White would never do that!

You didn't give me cavities, but you did give me a new boat to ride *SHOT*

I think I may kinda start shipping this ship (once I remember the name of it LOL *shot*) once I actually get to meet the Subway Masters themselves (*still trying to figure out how to find them in the subway*)

OH MY GOD ALL THE FLUFF AUUUGH I'M DROWNING IN ITTTT

After the very bittersweet Sorrow ending, this is a bundle of love that is perfect for reading before going to sleep. I quite like what you did with White and the Battle Subway: makes sense to have her become a part of the Line, I guess. What I really loved was the coat scene and DAT ENDING. HNNNNNNNG I'M GOING TO HAVE LIKE A BAJILLION CAVITIES. White is just so adorable at the end and after five (six if you count the other ending) chapters INGO MAKES A MOVE. What a way to bring his issues to a close.

I'm so happy you've ended this on a happy note, but I'm also sad. There needs to be more ExpressShipping on this site...Still, thank you so much for writing what you've already written! May your next adventure be just as great!

-That One Anon who isn't so Anon anymore.

Sorry, first I just have to say that when I read this part, I nearly snorted ice cream.

"The author would probably shoe-horn some shallow romance between me and N. Make me all sad and depressed that he left and pining over him so desperately and BLEGH!"

LOLOL that was great.

Anyway, I'm super super happy now. This chapter totally made my night. I love how you don't go overboard, don't move too fast, and don't get cliched. Seriously good stuff.

SGHGHSDKFDDFJLALDKKKKKKKK.

I appreciate angst. I really really do. In fact, my writing tends towards angst more often than not.

But when I read something, I loveeee happy endings. I love them to death. So if I came sooner, I would have totally voted for happy ending.

I think you should totally write some Nobori/White fluff in another fic. Please please please please! Poor guy deserves something to smile about at some point. (Anything with this pairing pleases me though).

But in all seriousness, great story. I definitely sympathize with the sort of anti-N sentiment, and I'm really glad to see you go in a different direction. You do deserve a medal for that, and I'd give you one if I had any.

No. I refuse to accept this. I am in denial •_•

(mind you I can't change whether or not white is actually dead) sob this is a nice angst filled

Chapter even though head canon says that nobori and Kudari are strongest in unova. Keep up the work!

WOW, that was so awesome I can't think of anything else to say XD I didn't think it would get THAT angsty XD so crazy! I'm loving this story more and more!

SHE CANT DIE! HUIWRHUWBHFJSDBFHJESBGFIA;KBTFIAWEBFI;ZTBFIWA;EHFWHAEIFRBAL;FMCS WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME *cries endlessly*

This is a beautiful story...but ...but I wanted to see them spend the rest of their lives together...*sniff*

LOL DENNIS COMMENT.

But oh my gosh laying the angst and drama on pretty thicky, though you're not hearing any complaints from me. I started hyperventilating a bit in joy/suspense when Nobori went up and grabbed N (WHY NO PUNCH TO THE FACE?). My favourite part has to be ''4. Letters to You''; how many times have I done the same thing Nobori did? Having him scribble it out instead of sending it to White seemed very plausible and in character.

You did such a good job on this chapter (as well as the other chapters). I'm going to be so sad when these chapters end...

I want the angst and for the story to (coughnevercough) end with a light fluffy feeling.

It would be nice to experience the first suggestion, but I'm (unfortunately) a sucker for happy endings.

There's also the fact that if Ingo goes through more angst he'll finally quit being shy and admit his affection for Hilda and vice versa. :D Soooo looking forward to that.:3

BTW, keep up the good work!

Angst and then fluff... I'm a sucker for happy endings!

I'll take just a moment, and say how hard I've been stalking this story since it started. Granted, I haven't played the game, but I know of it, and love these two. And love you, for touching on a shipment I really love. And in writing them this way. And with staying awesome, with such.. bwaa, wonderful everything. 3

As for the question, why I bucked up to review? I think it would flow smoother with the angst first, and THEN the happy ending; because it's never a happy ending unless it's the ending of a story, as much as it will forever continue, on it's own. :3

But! Even if it goes the other way (although I really want angst-to-happy, since.. yeah.. x3) I'll still stalk this fic. 3

Auf Wiedersehen! x'3 /runsandhides/

I vote for the sorrow line first then the happy stuff last! )