Haha, Her Royal Snobbiness... what a b*tch. I don't think I've seen the word snobby used quite so much in a chapter before lol. I think I've said it before, but would you mind doing something to differentiate between points of view, like ******* or something, because at the moment it's a little confusing :/ Other than that, I love it. I'm really enjoying it and I can't wait for more :D

Yours,

Panserik

Wow, this is a very emotionally charged chapter, don'tcha think? :) The way you write is very readable and fast moving. Just one tin thing though- when you changed points of view from Christine to Raoul I was momentarily confused as there wasn't any warning. Anyhoo, that wasn't a big thing, just me being nitpicky lol.

Looking forward to more,

Panserik

omg is the person erik?