| Reviews for We Came to Help |
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Guest 4/8/13 . chapter 6 Type your review for this chapter here... |
rm928 3/17/13 . chapter 6That was entertaining, I hope to see more of it soon! |
ben 3/9/13 . chapter 6 this story was excellent. i really like that you actually mad it seem like it could really be part of the anime, and the charecters personalities were spot on in my opinion |
Savaris 6/13/12 . chapter 6Well! Now those rushed action scenes have been done with... now hopefully you'll go back to focus on to develop the characters more and that action junky was satisfied with this chapter... |
Savaris 6/13/12 . chapter 4Well, Manami took it better than I imagined it to be, thank goodness. Yeah, it'd be best for Ellis and Kuune to lay off Manami for a bit for her to cool off. That bit bit about Chaika being a mother threw me for a loop when I first read about it months ago... I mean, just look at her! And how she acts! |
Savaris 6/13/12 . chapter 3Man, I'm starting to feel sorry for Jens... and does Capt. Kuune really have feelings for Kio? Or is that simply the hormones talking (she's so adorable, yeah)? Will Manami accept the invite? I'll find out in the next installment... which is probably 0.5 seconds after sending this review. Nice touch in having Kio retain Catian genes... more hijinx that way. |
Savaris 6/13/12 . chapter 1Nice. This is like a season two for Asobi, then! There were some things left out from the series like what was going to happen after what with them making their intentions known to Kio... I'm also curious as to what will befall those two Dogisians... Can't they all just get along? |
Thanatoss 6/8/12 . chapter 6An excellent story, after watching the anime I was looking for an in-depth story that continued after the Asobi ni Iku yo anime ended and this story fulfills completely. I enjoy your writing style, and personally think you have done an excellent continuation of the main story/romance. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep up the great work. |
Pablo2942 5/30/12 . chapter 6Just had a totally random idea that might work for you for a story idea. How about going with this storyline arc and adding it into a crossover with The Cat Returns? That could lead to some interesting situations between the character interactions on the revelation of that world. |
Kenneth Gifford 5/25/12 . chapter 6 This is a great story. Not only does it provide a continuation of a great anime that ended quite abruptly, but it is a continuation that is quite consistent w/ the original work and well-written. I really enjoyed it and can only hope that you will continue w/ the story. I do see that it has been quite since it was last updated, but I can still hope. Please write continuation. Truth this was actually very similar to what I was thinking might actually happen minus the captain and the dogsian, but I did think some of the other catians did seem very interested in Kio as well |
Keiichi and Belldandy 4evr 5/16/12 . chapter 6love the story so far and cant wait 2 c what happens next. i hope jens survives in the escape pod and ends up befriending kio, aoi, manami, ellis, and kuune. it would also be funny if jens ends up becoming one of kios girlfrends 2. |
Neferius 5/10/12 . chapter 6Awesome...that's all I really HAVE to say. I'm glad it was fun for you to write, because it was quite fun to read. I look forward to you continuing this eventually. Read ya Later |
godofmadness43 5/9/12 . chapter 6well this was a good story, glad Kuune and Ellis got what they needed, though i wonder what's the next arc gonna be? only time will tell i guess |
sh8ad8ow 5/9/12 . chapter 6Good story so far please continue soon. |
Rocketman1728 4/29/12 . chapter 5Nice :) |